A part of my second short story

“He’d left her a surprise, like he did most mornings. On the stove there was a bowl of oatmeal with a cinnamon heart at its center. A neon pink post-it next to it read: I know you have a busy day today so I thought I’d add some love to it. She liked his cheesiness, reminiscent of a love she lost years ago. ”

I’m reviewing it and editing it for class. However, a wise woman once said, a piece of work is never really finished. Therefore I think I’ll work on this during winter break and possibly make it longer than what I have now. Yay!